In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In recent years, reading online has become more popular thanks to the widespread use of the
internet
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. Some
people
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believe that
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revolution may lead to replacing free online press with printed ones in the
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, I personally agree with
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claim to some extent because of the reasons that will be discussed in
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essay. On the one hand, many commentators justifiably argue that reading books and newspapers through the
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some merits.
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with, it is free of charge and
people
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do not have to pay fees. More precisely, as soon as a person connects to the
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, most of the resources they need will be available.
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, studying online materials requires no special time or
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. it means that they are accessible whenever and wherever
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want.
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, not having to carry things like books not only decreases the possibility of losing them but
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increases individuals' convenience.
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, they are those who subscribe to the view that there are a lot of benefits in reading printed journals and books. They maintain that it can prevent eye diseases. As research findings confirm that excessive use of electronic devices
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harmful
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individuals' health. Eye weakness,
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, is a prevalent result of
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usage. They
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assert that
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way of studying gives a sense of nostalgia which is
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people
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on due to the fact that it reminds them
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childhood memories when data connections
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not common as
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today
todays
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, there will be some readers who prefer reading printed resources. In conclusion,
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emerging the
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has changed different aspects of
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rising their willingness to study online, I personally believe that it is not able to eliminate printed materials completely owing to
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the reasons
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mentioned above.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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