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of
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believe that
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ought to go after
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of the community, on the
some people claim that
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must be at liberty to act as single. Before giving my opinion
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would like to look after both
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aspects.
Discussing the
view the foremost one is that, customs bind teenagers with the aura and identity of the society. It will uphold the social connection.
Furthermore
, in order to preserve
it is mandatory to follow them. If children do not
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the cultural knowledge after a matter of
time
it will fade and get extinct
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the modern era.
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,
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of
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traditional values teaches us to respect our elders which ultimately leads to
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bond between families and that
also
enhance the growth of
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Analyzing the other view, in
this
period of
time
every person
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freedom and
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to do whatever they like.
This
is because if they have their own choices they can be more creative.
On the other hand
, some
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are better if they change or can be avoided. To
this
, in previous
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women were forced to marry
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early age and were stopped from
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further
. After
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they have to do household chores only. But now as the
time
is changing people are neglecting
this
kind of
,
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are living their life on their terms.
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is a major
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the development of
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.
To conclude, in my
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to follow
in order to
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of traditions from older to younger is very important. But
also
living life on own terms is
also
essential. So
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believe customs ought to be
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but
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should not be forced on
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and not be an obstacle
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the growth of younger ones.