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Some people think that young people should folow tradtions of the society, while other people think that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #folow #tradtions #society #individuals
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 of
pupil
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pupils
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 believe that
youngster
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youngsters
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 ought to go after
culture
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the culture
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 of the community, on the
contray
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contrary
 some people claim that
juvenile
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 must be at liberty to act as single. Before giving my opinion
i
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I
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 would like to look after both
the
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aspects. Discussing the
foremor
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foremost
 view the foremost one is that, customs bind teenagers with the aura and identity of the society. It will uphold the social connection.
Furthermore
, in order to preserve
heritage
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 it is mandatory to follow them. If children do not
adapt
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adopt
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 the cultural knowledge after a matter of
time
 it will fade and get extinct
from
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 the modern era.
Additionally
,
adaptation
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an adaptation
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 of
a
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traditional values teaches us to respect our elders which ultimately leads to
better
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a better
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 bond between families and that
also
 enhance the growth of
civilizartion
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civilization
. Analyzing the other view, in
this
 period of
time
 every person
have
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has
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 freedom and
right
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the right
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 to do whatever they like.
This
 is because if they have their own choices they can be more creative.
On the other hand
, some
religions
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myth
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myths
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 are better if they change or can be avoided. To
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illustrate
ilustrate
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illustrate
this
, in previous
time
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times
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 women were forced to marry
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at in
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in
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an
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 early age and were stopped from
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the study
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study
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studying
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further
. After
certain
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a certain
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age
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,age
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 they have to do household chores only. But now as the
time
 is changing people are neglecting
this
 kind of
customes
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customers
customer
,
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women
womens
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women
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 are living their life on their terms.
This
 is a major
aspects
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for
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of
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 the development of
country
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the country
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. To conclude, in my
opinion
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 to follow
coustems
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customs
custom
 in order to
inheritance
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the inheritance
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 of traditions from older to younger is very important. But
also
 living life on own terms is
also
 essential. So
i
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 believe customs ought to be
follow
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followed
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 but
it
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they
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 should not be forced on
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the youngster
a youngster
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youngster
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youngsters
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 and not be an obstacle
in
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to
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 the growth of younger ones.
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