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Many famous sports players advertise sports products. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, advertisement plays a significant role to promote products. Businessman target famous celebrities to advertise it. I believe that its disadvantages are overlapping its advantages. To commence with, there are numerous drawbacks of advertising using popular faces.
First
 and foremost, it creates conflicts between parents and their children. To explain, those who have low income and cannot afford these fancy and costly products, create issues because their children are not aware of the family's financial situation. Their main concern or to buy bread and butter for their family.
Moreover
, parents who are unable to fulfil their children's desires punish themself with dangerous activities.
On the other hand
,
although
 there are some demerits , merits cannot be neglected. Advertising sports products boon for all
such
 as players who are being paid by the company and by seeing their favourite players were get encouraged to buy the product and the industry get their profit as well. The whole cycle is closely related to each other
in addition
 it encourages you to show interest in sports which helps them to keep themselves fit because health is wealth. to recapitulate,undoubtedly, the outcome of promotion has adverse effects on youth but they get inspiration to support and play physical games
then
 playing online.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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