y countries have started to give money to unlucky countries to help. Some people argue that rich countries should help in other ways, such as food supplements, and educational ınstruments since fi

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have started to give money to unlucky

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to help. Some people argue that rich people should help in other ways,

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as food supplements, and educational ınstruments since financial

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does not completely end poverty. I completely agree that monetary

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should not be the only type.

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of all, most poor

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have unsettled political conflicts which could cause the wrong use of financial

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, every year many European

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help their African counterparts.

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, we have never seen a country that finished its poverty ıssues with outsourced cash.

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, financial

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could make poor

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relax about earning their own capital and they may become dependent. Fınally, as ı argued before, the wrong kind of using bill by governments could cause huge problems.

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they use the money on martial investment the help would not make any sense.

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, Focusing on society's needs could make faster improvements.

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as, preventing deadly diseases with vaccine aids.

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, food supplies are extremely important for many

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, because they can't obtain them even with the money.

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, nutritionally enhanced foods can not be found in undeveloped

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due to their lack of technology.

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, giving

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kınd of food to

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, which are battling famine, could have a groundbreaking effect. To sum up, financial

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could seem a good way to help others rather than opponents.

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the best way to help people who are suffering in poor

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should be to proceed with their needings

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