It must be a woman who stays at home to care for children. Men are not suited to this kind of work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In
this
contemporary epoch, whilst proponents hold the view that ladies should not work in order to take care of their offspring, opponents have a diverse perspective. However
, I am convinced that both genders should collaborate in their family and professional lives because that will have a profound impact on their relationships. My contention will be further
explained.
To begin
with, many advocates discern that mothers should not only stay at home to do their household chores , but they
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In other words
, work will broaden their horizons ,and increase their interpersonal skills as well as collaboration skills . This
might be exemplified by many female employees in Egypt who are knowledgeable and well educated
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Hence
, what can be said is that if many women are encouraged to have full-time jobs , they will be influenced positively.
Furthermore
, many countries have been suffering from economic recession for years ,and that increases the demand for an extra source of income . To illustrate, when mothers participate in the spendings
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Thus
, not only they will raise their standards of living, but they will also
improve the financial situations
of their countries.
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