These days Internet –based courses have become a popular alternative to University – based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

The
classes
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Internet
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replaced those of
colleges
year by year. Some people say that
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on
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useful as they do not need to go to
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, whereas others believe that learning
in
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university is essential.
Firstly
, one of the advantages to take
classes
online is that
students
can cut down the
time
to commute to their
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and
then
can spend that
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a lot of things,
such
as their assignments
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and hobbies. Focusing on the assignments, the
colleges
can give more tasks to
students
due to reduce commuting
time
, which may lead to improving
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growth.
In addition
, considering
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hobbies,
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student can expand their network of contacts by meeting and interacting with people they would not be involved with at
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, which may have a positive effect on their
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career
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career
.
However
, there are some benefits
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studying at university.
Students
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typically
can learn not only academics but
also
a lot of skills they can not learn online, including
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the relationship
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relationship
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relationships
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with friends,
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and time
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management. Above all, the period of college
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life
lifes
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life
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the best
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opportunity
opprtunity
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opportunity
for
students
to acquire these skills because they are essential to
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in society and success
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carrier. In my opinion, both
classes
based on
Internet
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and universities have each advantage, which means that the options depend on people and what they have as the top
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priority.
Furthermore
, I believe that it is
also
important that more and more
colleges
offer a wide range of
classes
more
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flexibility
.
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