It is impossible to help all people in the world , so governments should only focus on people in their own countries .To what extant do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary day ,a highly controversial issue whether relating to the

governments

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assistance

in which some people believe that the official

athourties

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authorities

like

governments

must extend their help to all individuals those who

are need

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help even they

are belong

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to different country , while others argue that they should concentrate to their own communities .Personally, I

dovocate

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advocate

the

first

statements for numerous reasons.In

this

essay

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I am going to examine the phenomenon from both viewpoints and I will support my real_relvant examples.

To begin

with, in the modern day a plethora of people argue that the progress

government

must play an important role in the globe to give a hand

for

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those who need it .The main reason for

this

claim is that

,

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the vast majority of

governments

have flourished and they have the prospects to assist others who

requires

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assistance

.

For instance

, the united states

is

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the most country that has a huge

economic

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in

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all over the world , so

they

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can help poor nations to achieve stability in the world .

In addition

, the existence of an

assistance

system can ensure the safety of the universal from the spread of poverty .

Agood

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A good

illustration here, the invention of

assistance

organization have played a crucial role to distribute abundant

of

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supplies for homeless individuals in different areas.

On the other hand

, some opponents view that there is

local

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issue that

it

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needs to focus on by the

government

to achieve

the

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prosperity

instead

to

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west their financial supplies abroad .The critical reason for believing

this

is that there are many worthy local

issue

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that

it

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requires the

government

to help their citizens and provide

the

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high level

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standard

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for them .

Moreover

, many improvements need

many efforts

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from the

government

,

therefore

they can not extend their help globally .

For example

, the

last

organizations which

constructed

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in

many

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any

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part

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of the countries are the most example

prove

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the importance of local

people

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interests To conclude,

although

the various arguments

which

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assert different view side ,

but

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I consider that the

governments

must provide the efforts and

edquate

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adequate

supplies for the nations who

are suffer

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in different

sphere

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of life to ensure fairness and safety in the

contenients

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continents