It is impossible to help all people in the world , so governments should only focus on people in their own countries .To what extant do you agree or disagree?

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assistance
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in which some people believe that the official
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must extend their help to all individuals those who
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to different country , while others argue that they should concentrate to their own communities .Personally, I
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the vast majority of
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the most country that has a huge
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all over the world , so
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can help poor nations to achieve stability in the world .
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system can ensure the safety of the universal from the spread of poverty .
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supplies for homeless individuals in different areas.
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needs to focus on by the
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west their financial supplies abroad .The critical reason for believing
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to help their citizens and provide
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for them .
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from the
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they can not extend their help globally .
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of the countries are the most example
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the importance of local
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I consider that the
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must provide the efforts and
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in different
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of life to ensure fairness and safety in the
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continents
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