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These days Internet –based courses have become a popular alternative to University – based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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The
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 based on the Internet have replaced those of colleges year by year. Some people say that
classes
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 on the Internet are useful as they do not need to go to
college
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, whereas others believe that learning at university is essential.
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, one of the advantages to take
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a class
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class
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 online is that
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 can cut down the
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 to commute to their
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 and
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 can spend that
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 on a lot of things,
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 as their assignments, part-
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 and hobbies. Focusing on the assignments, the colleges can give more tasks to
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 due to reduce commuting
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, which may lead to improving
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’ growth.
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, considering hobbies,
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 can expand their network of contacts by meeting and interacting with people they would not be involved with at
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, which may have a positive effect on their career.
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, these are some benefits to studying at university.
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 typically can learn not only academics but
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 a lot of skills they can not learn online, including relationships with friends and
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 management. Above all, the period of
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 life is the best opportunity for
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 to acquire these skills because they are essential to participating in society and success in their
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. In my opinion, both
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 on the Internet and universities have each advantage, which means that the opinions depend on people and what they have as the top priority.
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, I believe that it is
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 important that more and more colleges offer a wide range of
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 flexibility.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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