You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: ● say how you feel about his/her performance ● give details of your music-related activities ● explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities
Dear James,
I am Pradip Kumar, and I am a big fan of you and your amazing
music
. I attended your last
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needless to say that it was one of the best performances I have ever enjoyed. Your performance was Correct pronoun usage
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at
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top notch
and astonishing.
I would like to brief you about myself that I am Add a hyphen
top-notch
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a small
small scale
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music
director. I have been working for many adverts Add the comma(s)
,music
agency
for many years. I have produced approximately 600-650 advertising background Fix the agreement mistake
agencies
music
and melodies.
These days I am working on Pop music
too and some of my collection I have enclosed to this
letter for your reference. I am seeking for
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help to give me a breakthrough in the Remove the article
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music
industry so I would be grateful if you could provide me any
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production work.
Thank you for your consideration and I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Pradip KumarSubmitted by pradipk.makwana on
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