Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities . What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages ?

These days, it is a usual trend in the young community to migrate to urban areas for

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study

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or occupation purposes.

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kind of migration of young

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into the

cities

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has some benefits and some kind of drawbacks. In

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I will discuss related advantages and

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and show my view that the advantages outweigh the

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with, the advantage of

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exodus is the better opportunities to

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in well-reputed schools and colleges for teenagers. In the metro ,

cities

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the level of education is high and many young students want to take advantage of

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by studying

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these universities.

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, in London, there are many highly ranked engineering institutes located which provide an extreme level of

study

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environment and produce highly qualified engineers.

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, for those who want to

work

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in big

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, it offers highly paid jobs as well as an opportunity to learn from the new daily challenges of their

work

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, a nurse can earn $4000-5000 per month in rural areas whereas, he/she is offered about $8000-9000 salary per month in a city.

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, the main disadvantage of

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kind of migration is leaving old age

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behind in

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rural

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causes stress on the elderly

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and the job can be executed by young force, elderly

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are not able to manage

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it.To illustrate

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, if there is not enough young force in villages, old

people

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might not be able to carry out all the physical hard

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. The

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disadvantage is leaving many schools and colleges without students which creates financial stress on the authorities to run and maintain them.

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, many villages around London run schools with almost half of the capacity. As a

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result

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causes a financial burden on the local municipality. In conclusion,

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there are some

disadvantages

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of reduced young force and financial difficulty for the local authorities of the urban area, there are many advantages that outweigh the

disadvantages

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like providing exciting opportunities to

study

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and

work

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in the

cities

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