You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilites for shoppers could be improved. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: say in general what you like about shopping in your area, say what is wrong with the facilities, suggest how they can be improved

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my concern to improve shopping facilities in my area. I am a resident of Acme Heights 2 and I have been living here for the

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10 years. These days all the residents of our society face a big problem.

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, I am glad that we have a small shopping complex nearby from where almost all the basic things can be purchased. All types of amenities are available in

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area except the pharmacy which is very much needed. To purchase any type of medicine we have to travel a long way and sometimes in an emergency we feel so inconvenient to go far away from home. We have older people living with us who needs medication on daily basis. So I would like to request you to open a small pharmacy around our society from where we can have at least our day-to-day medicine.

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way, everyone will feel safe and secure. I shall be thankful for your positive response. Yours Faithfully, Shikha

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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