Some people say that children should go to school as young as possible, while others believe that children should go to school when they are at least seven years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is a controversy that some advocates suppose that

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should be taken to

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at early as possible, whereas there is a different statement that the appropriate age of

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for education at

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is

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for the least. In my perspective, I agree with the

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opinion is that not to let

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go to

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at under

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years old. In terms of starting teaching

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at

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at an early age, parents expect their

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to receive a great education from the initial period when they knew to speak

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and walk. Obviously, the

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years of

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' life are the time they are easily affected by the actions, speeches, or characters of adults. Taking the

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to the educational environment at the period of three to

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years old helps them to be educated

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good things and form wonderful personalities for the rest of their lives.

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, the start of studying at

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loses

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's adulthood. Precisely, studying at

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is synonymous with getting homework, resulting in them having less time to play.

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, the

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must pay much attention to complete assignments.

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, Vietnamese students are known to spend much more time on learning than on relaxation. They are always afraid of being punished by teachers if they do not complete homework. It accidentally causes pressure on those

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who are too young to be worth receiving

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burdens.

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some people want their

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to go to

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age as soon as possible, I strongly agree that

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just should get an education from schools when they turn

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. It is reasonable for those

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to start their studies seriously but still enjoy their childhood fully.