Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -describe where you lived when you were a student at the university -recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation -warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

Hi John, I was writing to say congratulations on getting admitted to the Computer Technical Support program at Seneca. I heard you are looking for accommodation and wanted to share some tips. As a Seneca student, I lived in a one-bedroom apartment. It was located in Scarborough and was close to the university. It had a lot of grocery shops nearby which was convenient for me. I wanted to provide some suggestions on where to look for housing.

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, check with the university whether they have a room in their hostel.

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, look for housing advertisements on local websites like Kijiji. There are probably your best options when looking for accommodation. I wanted to remind you about students' bad decisions when choosing accommodation.

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, try to find a place near the university, which can save you a lot of travel time.

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, ensure restaurants are nearby so you can have a meal when you are not in the mood to cook. I hope all of

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was helpful for you. Take care, Imtiaz Chowdhury

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Aug 29, 2022

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