Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
In
this
modern era, it's an irony that we still see few people on the roads or on the streets begging for money
for their livelihood. Some people believe that it is wrong to give money
to beggars
, who ask for money
for their food or for their living, while some think that this
is the right thing to do. In my opinion, it is wrong to give money
to beggars
and I think this
way
for two reasons, which I will explore in this
essay.
Firstly
, to begin
with, I would like to say that giving money
to beggars
is not a good solution of
their problems, Change preposition
to
however
, pragmatically there are other ways to help them, such
as by educating them, by giving them food, or clothes. Since,
it is not possible to help one and all in the mentioned suggested Remove the comma
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way
, ,
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instead
, we can take care of at least one person by all our plausible means. For example
, nowadays there are various NGOs which are working for the better life of the needy one, we should guide them to follow such
organisations and to become a part of them.
Subsequently
, I feel that the right way
to help beggars
is to teach them and to aid in knowing that, they can also
do some work
to earn their livelihood. For instance
, if we keep giving them money
, then
this
will become their habit and they will make a wrong perception in their mind about getting money
from others without doing any work
, which instigate them towards a wrong way
of living. Hence
, it is better to offer them some work
, as a result
, they will know the value of money
,
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work
.
In conclusion, I believe that giving money
to beggars
when they ask for it, is the wrong way
to help them. Instead
, we should help in other ways, as mentioned in the above paragraphs, which will enhance their life in a better way
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