The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend?

In today's modern era, more and more kids in the

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world have become obese

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. The ratio of obesity among youngsters

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up by 20% over the past ten years. The reasons

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the impact of the phenomenon will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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with, one of the main reasons is that there are so many fast food restaurants located in

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countries,

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as McDonald's, Five Guys, KFC...etc. Having high-calorie snacks is part of the youngsters' daily routine.

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, it is common to see students holding a

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and eating french fries

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they are walking on the street.

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, lack of exercise will be another cause of the issue. Foodstuff which contains a large amount of sugar makes people feel sleepy and drowsy,

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, they tend to feel much lazier to work out.

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since fast food is quite convenient, easy to obtain, and

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much cheaper than other nutritious cuisine, parents prefer to get a full fast-food meal set within 10 minutes,

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of spending more time at a grocery store and in the kitchen preparing a healthy cuisine for their children. The effects of the growing trend are rather worrisome as these overfat kids will soon grow up and cause a heavier burden on society.

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, the young generation might become more sluggish and have developmental delays

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obesity. To illustrate, obese students are not only slow in their movement

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but in their reaction as well. With that being said, their study performance could be affected

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, which contributes to lower productivity when they grow up.

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, being overweight leads to more serious problems and diseases, including diabetes, high blood pressure or angina pectoris,

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, consuming more medical and social resources.

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, the government will have to allocate more funds toward medical treatment

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public facilities for these overfat residents. In conclusion, insufficient outdoor activities and poor diet are the main causes of fatness, which results in plentiful diseases and affects human development to a certain degree. The community should take the problems seriously and raise citizens' awareness of maintaining a healthy diet and lifestyle.