School and university students learn lessons far better from their teachers than from other resources, such as the internet and television. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

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age, where lots of knowledge are acquired. With

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discussing the merits of children gaining more learning skills than their tutors.

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fact in the sense that, they buy them a lot of gadgets which

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these children to the exposure of learning from the internet.

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, a child of one year already

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the experience of answering a call or even

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a passworded phone due to the that the child plays constantly with gadgets.

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learn from watching television especially from watching

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cartoons,

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their understanding and makes the fast

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learning. In conclusion, parents

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of the

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by helping the juvenile understand their learning skills.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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135 words

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School and university students learn lessons far better from their teachers than from other resources, such as the internet and television. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, most of the information is available on the Internet, whereas in the past, knowledge was stored in books and on paper. Do you think the advantages of this situation outweigh its disadvantages?

Some people think that people who immigrate to a new country should accept the new culture as their own rather than remain in separate minority groups and live in different lifestyles. Do you agree or disagree?