Some people think travelling abroad is a valuable experience for young people. Others think it wastes too much time and money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some
communities
believe that a trip abroad gives a salient experience to youngsters while some other communities
argue with this
matter and say that young communities
are wasting their era and money by travelling abroad. In this
essay, I will discuss both scenarios and then
I will give my opinion on this
matter.
To begin
with, Nowadays, Most communities
are travelling around the world. These communities
were fascinated by exploring new stuff
. By travelling, pupils will explore new stuff
like multiple cultures, and traditions. For instance
, Recently, many communities
are travelling abroad from India and spending their leisure term abroad. In this
way, communities
from India are getting to know about abroad. the community will get more interacted with others while travelling and improve their social skills.
On the other side, When the public wants to sail abroad they should look after their financial status because travelling abroad is expensive. The community should trip abroad during their spare era otherwise
it will lead to risks to their jobs. The community who want to explore new stuff
should travel abroad otherwise
it is a waste of moment and money. For instance
, My brother is an introvert, who does not like travelling. But his friends took him to travel abroad but he returned back early because he is unable to interact with people abroad. Finally
, he wastes his time and his wages on his trip.
To sum up, In my view, both statements are valuable. But I support the former statement because by exploring new stuff
we are staying in this
advanced technology world. By travelling, people will try to be independent, get to know new cultures, etc.Submitted by madarapulavanya1998 on
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