You need to translate a document into a different language, and you have a friend who speaks that language. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Explain what the document is why you need a translation - Explain why this is urgent and important to you - Ask your friend if and when he/she will be able to help you

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Dear Rahul, I hope your new job is going well. I'm writing to ask for your help

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something which is very urgent for me. You know I'm currently living in Mohia Apartments. So, the landlord of my

house

to planning to sell his flat and has asked me to find a new

house

. Luckily, I have found another flat in the same building, but they have given me the lease agreement in the Punjabi language which I have to get translated before signing it.

Although

I tried to find a translator nearby, I couldn't find any. As we both studied all our classes together, it came to my mind that you had taken

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language as your optional course in

the

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school, and you were pretty good

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that. Now, it is really important for me to sign

this

agreement today itself so that I can move

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the other

house

by tomorrow. Before that, it's a must to get it translated so that I can understand all the terms and

condition

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written in that document. I know you have a travelling job and your schedule is really hectic during weekdays but

this

is something for which you have to take out some time. If you are in

this

region only

then

please come to my

house

when you get some time, or else let me know and I will come to your place in the evening. I hope you will be able to take out time to help me in

this

situation. Warm regards, Aman

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

258 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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