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The diagram shows the process by which honey is produced by
bees
, which can be divided into seven consecutive stages. The
first
 step is that
bees
 get out of the hive where they live.
Next
, after looking for a place where are plenty of flowers, the
bees
 will stay on the flowers and start collecting
sweet
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 liquid in them. After that, the
bees
 fly back to their container, bring nectar back and save it into cells, which are lots of cells in a hive.
 In the
next
 stage,
this
 is worth noting that the
bees
 lie on the cells and move their wings rapidly. Before honey is produced by them, the
bees
 will through the speed of moving their wind in order to manufacture wind for evaporation, which means it helps water in nectar change to gas. In the
last
 step, after all of the processes mentioned above are done, the honey will be completely made.
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