All museums and art galleries should be free becuase they are an important oart of contry's culture. How far do u agree with this statement.

Nowadays there is a dispute over the charge value for visiting

artistic related

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places

such

as

museums

and art galleries. I firmly believe that

places

which represent the cultural values of a nation, should not be free to visit and should at least cost a modest amount of

money

for

visitors

. In my perspective of view, there are multiple reasons that I would argue against the statement that cultural

centers

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like

museums

should be free to

visitors

. At the outset,

places

like

museums

where

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hold

a lots

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of relics and valuable items, need lots of maintenance to make these

places

prepared for

visitors

and absorb

audience

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.

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maintenance has expenses so there must be some revenue

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in order to offset the expenditure related to conserving these

highly

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price

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items,

otherwise

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after a while these antiques will be devastated and bring a lot of damage to

the

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society and its culture.

Secondly

, there are always some robbers out there who perpetually are looking for an opportunity to heist the valuable things that are being kept in

places

such

as art galleries, and for that reason,

this kind

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of

places

should be equipped with anti-robbery

cutting edge

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devices which prevents any vicious thoughts about banditry in

this

places

.

Equipments

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such

as hidden cameras, laser systems and modern locking systems are required in

this

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sensitive

places

and they all need lots of

money

and

this

money

can be earned by the visiting charge from these

places

.

Finally

,

besides

all the mentioned

spendings

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above, there

are

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expenditure

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expenditures

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for accommodation and the leasing or even purchasing

the

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place that the museum must be placed in and since it is related to the culture of a nation, the place of the museum must be in a prestigious part of the city to gain more attention and

visitors

, particularly foreigner

visitors

and so getting

such

a building requires a lot of

money

. In conclusion, in my point of view,

museums

and artistic

places

should not be free to

visitors

in order to earn their spending,

otherwise

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these

places

will be abandoned after a while and no one will go and visit them, due to the lack of maintenance and

preserverance

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perseverance

.