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Although most people are reacher than in the past, modern life seems very stressful and the number of people are suffering from is at record level. What are the main causes of stress in modern life and how could stress be reduced.

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Compared to the past, in modern
society
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 many
people
 are suffering from
stress
 due to the quickly changing and vastly developing technology. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the main reasons why
people
 feel stressed and solutions to manage it. In
the
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 fast-developing society,
people
 tend to feel overwhelmed because of the quickly shifting nature of civilization. Everything is more computerized, information is easily accessed because of technology. The working
environment
 forces
people
 to
work
in
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a
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faster method.
This
 type of fast-paced working
environment
 can lead
people
 to feel anxious.
Secondly
, nowadays because the working
environment
 is more automated, it demands
people
to
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work
 more. Having to finish
increased
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 amount of
work
 in the same limited time can make workers feel less in control. It is important to organize and manage
tasks
 in a hostile
environment
. It will help
people
 to analyze and prioritize different
tasks
 to finish on time. While organizing the different
tasks
, managing them in a timely manner can help reduce
stress
.
By calculating
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 how much time is required to finish each task, it can help
people
 to feel more in control. When I was working at Samsung, I would write all my daily
tasks
 given by
manager
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 and write a timeline for each one. It helped me identify which ones
are
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needed to be finished
first
, so I can recognize my daily
work
 in a more functioning and controlled
environment
. Regular exercise is a useful tool to help reduce the level of
stress
 in our body, for anyone feeling much pressure. Exercise helps relieve tension in our body built while working. It
also
 decreases the level of cortisol, a hormone produced when our body is under
stress
. In conclusion, many
people
 feel overwhelmed due to the fast-paced society we live in which requires
people
 to
work
 more.
This
 can make
people
 feel less at ease. There are multiple ways for
people
 to cope in
the
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 stressful
environment
 that will help them to feel more in control.
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