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Television advertising aimed at children nowadays. What are the effects of television advertising for children? Should television advertising for children be controlled?

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These days
, with the severe
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competition
competitions
competiotions
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competition
 between companies, a large number of companies often are targeting
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although
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 they do not have assets. Sometimes TV commercials contribute many
children
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 and
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adolescents
adolescence
adolesence
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adolescents
 to consume some
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necessary
neccessary
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necessary
 things. There are some detrimental aftermaths which are caused to young
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This
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advertising
advertishing
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advertising
 corporations.
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the reason
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reason
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reasons
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 why the
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 could be attracted the attention of
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 even though they don't need these things in the
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Because
 the TV commercials are too much exciting and stimulating. In
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, the
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children
childrens
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children
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 would be suffered from
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false
informations
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 as the
ads
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 took their awareness which can assess what the
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information
informtaion
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information
 is right.
Secondly
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, because of the former
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 the
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children
childrens
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children
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 will be the erratic and tendentious
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buyers
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For example
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, some articles illustrate that
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impulse
 buying
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some
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 people who
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 contacted
fascinating
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 and compelling
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 when they were young. So, we should rectify the limits of the
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 since they are harmful to
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's mental.
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 of all, if we restrain the use of the
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 attraction
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 as funny
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humour
senses of humour
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 and exciting
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music
kinds of music
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, the
children
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 would not concentrate
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 them too much. To be specific, the
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children
childrens
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 would not have some dubious
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interesting
interesing
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interesting
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 always have some seriously suspicious and harmful information.
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, without
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criticizing advertisements, most
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people
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include
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the
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children
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 could become wise consumers. In conclusion,
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the
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advertising which are targeting
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issues, we do not suffer from impulsive buying and getting sceptical information when we
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endeavour
 to
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control
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control
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