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some people say that now we can see films on our phone or tablets,there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema. Discuss both views and your opinions.

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Some
people
 indicate that now we can watch movies on our own electronic devices and there is no need to go to the
cinema
 while others think that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in
cinema
Correct article usage
the cinema
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. In
this
 essay, I'll discuss both views and explain why I agree with the
first
 statement. On the one hand, films are now possible to see on electronics
such
 as phones and tablets.
Firstly
,
this
 choice would save a lot of money.
For example
, a person can still see a movie at home free of charge while his neighbour
have
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has
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 to buy a ticket at the
cinema
 for 70 dollars to do the same.
Secondly
, it is easier and you don't have to waste time queueing up.
For instance
,
instead
 of queueing in line at the movie
theater
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theatre
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, a person can just sit at home and turn on his tablet to watch a movie.
On the other hand
, to be fully enjoyed, movies need to be seen at the
cinema
. Cinemas have a certain atmosphere that
people
 can feel when visiting. It is true that
people
 love the vibe at the
cinema
 with the big screen and lots of popcorn.
Furthermore
,
people
 think that it is full of emotions at the cineplex. In conclusion, both
choice
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choices
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 has
its
Correct pronoun usage
their
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 own pros and cons. But considering the advantages above, I prefer watching the movies at home on
elctronics
Correct your spelling
electronics
electronic
.
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