You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

#party #friend #city #directions #venue #addresses

Dear David, I hope you are doing well. I am glad to invite you to the party arranged

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10th September at Hotel Novotel. I am inviting all our college mates. As you know I started my PHD course in economics after completing my master's. I am very pleased to inform you that I have completed my PhD with a

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distinction

grade and I have been selected as an outstanding performer by the university.

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, One of the employers already offered me a job and asked me to join the company from 1st October. I want to celebrate

this

happiness with all my well-wishers. You have to take the train to City Stop and from that take bus No-225 towards Great Avenue. The hotel Novotel is just opposite the Bus Stop. I have invited 10 friends and booked 5 hotel-sharing rooms. You have to just give your details to reception and they will take care of all. I have already paid all the relevant expenses. Hope to meet you soon. Yours lovingly, Anand

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8 paragraphs

174 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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