Improving living conditions within society is a far superior approach to crime prevention than the treat of punishment. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement and why?

There is an ongoing discussion around whether the development of better

life

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conditions is a better

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crime

than the treatment of the

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. As far as I concern the best

solution

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this

issue is the improvement of the

societies

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live

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conditions.

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crime

growths

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in the poorest parts of the cities. Here is important to broaden free services for families and kids

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as free music and

sport

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centers

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or professional class for manual

works

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.

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the possibility

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single mothers to take their kids to the

sport

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center

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in the evenings while they

attempt

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do

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part-time job is the perfect

solution

to solve the problem.

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education is arguably a significant part of the problem. Research suggests that people without

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high school level of education generally

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to

crime

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since they don't have access to a huge range of jobs position.

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the total free school programs can avoid the

work seeking

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problem. To summarize, I'm sure that solving the everyday problems of

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society is a great

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crime

.