Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both and give your own opinion.
Numerous teenagers all over the world with strict
parents
would love to make their own choices but there are also
many other teenagers who would love there to be a constant routine in their life
. Wheater the child
would love to have a
scene Remove the article
apply
freedom
and individuality, it is the Change preposition
of freedom
parents'
decision to implement Correct your spelling
parent's
this
lifestyle. Some parents
may have an ideology that this
would develop a selfish, whilst others believe that children
will learn how to become an independent members
of society.
Correct the article-noun agreement
independent members
an independent member
Moreover
, having self-control over one's life
can build independency
that causes self-love and builds self-esteem. Tackling real-Correct your spelling
independence
life
problems, for example
, financial responsibility (assuming the parent provides a monthly allowance or works at a job) of saving and spending money. It will teach children
how to invest and give money to the poor which will build empathy and many more skills that are useful to have in life
. Eventually through this
lifestyle the trust between a parent and a child
increase as now they have a common understanding of life
. Also
through this
way of living the child
recognises how to set priorities for important life
events. This
helps them contribute to society which will build a positive environment and communal trust among everyone.
On the other hand
, if a parent doesn't want to provide this
lifestyle to their child
then
it will have certain consequences. Such
as dependency issues and the development of social anxiety, both of which will have a negative effect on their life
. It is commonly seen that parents
ask their kids to move out, at the age of eighteen-years-old
. So if a Correct your spelling
eighteen years old
child
doesn't learn important life
lessons then
throwing them into a life
that they are not used to, then
surely they will struggle. Parents
would gate keep useful skills that the offspring will need and when seen struggling blame them instead
of themselves. I believe parents
who do this
have a fear of being forgotten when they're old, so they make their children
depend on them so they'll always need them in life
. Thus
giving an excuse, stating children
would later become selfish whilst in ,reality
it is a completely the opposite case.
To conclude, I believe that it is really important that Add an article
the reality
children
make their own choices and parents
provide the needed freedom for developing these skills which will 100% help them in the future. Parents
who have fear of being forgotten should learn that providing their child
with a free life
would later build trust and a healthy relationship between them, this
will result in a positive attitude towards living which will later reflect on the whole community.Submitted by azh310 on
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