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It is often considered that changes are more beneficial to people than traying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of changes overweight the disadvantages?

#changes #people
İt is considered by some people that
changes
 are more beneficial to people than
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traying
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trying
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 to avoid it and have everything remain the same. There are both
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advantages
 and
the
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disadvantages
 of change . İt can be certainly said
changes
 provide the
development
 of the
governments
 and the
development
 of the company but
on the other hand
 , they can eliminate our ethnic
roots
 or they can
devestate
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devastate
 our
environment
. The change
affect
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 human life in a crucial way . The two
mainly
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advantages
 of
changes
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firstly
 ,
changes
 provide the
development
 of the
governments
 , and
secondly
 the
development
 of the company .
Also
 ,
changes
 take place since the existence of the world , and
thus
 they affect companies or
governments
.
For instance
 , technology has become the most important thing in the world while it was not used a hundred years ago , and
thus
 many companies began
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 technology
to
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 their goals
or
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there were a few
governments
hundred
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 years ago but afterwards, many
governments
 took place thanks to
changes
 . Another point to consider is that the two
mainly
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disadvantages
 of
changes
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firstly
 , they can eliminate our ethnic
roots
 , and
secondly
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,
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they can
devestate
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devastate
 our
environment
.
Thus
 ,
changes
 affect badly our ethnic
roots
 and our
environment
 .
For instance
 , there are no
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big builts two hundred years ago but nowadays , there are big builts everywhere , and
therefore
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environment
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exposure to bad effects due to car use or big builts or we forget our ethnic
roots
 almost due to
changes
 because the time
pass
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 in a fast way . İn conclusion ,
changes
 have the
disadvantages
such
 as the
eliminate
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 of our ethnic
roots
 or the
devestate
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devastate
devastated
 of our
environment
 but
on the other hand
 , according to me , it can be certainly said the
advantages
 of
changes
 have a more
effect
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for
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 nature , and
thus
 the
advantages
 of
changes
 overweight the
disadvantages
.
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