It is often considered that changes are more beneficial to people than traying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of changes overweight the disadvantages?
İt is considered by some people that they can
changes
are more beneficial to people than Correct your spelling
trying
traying
to avoid it and have everything remain the same. There are bothCorrect your spelling
trying
the
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apply
advantages
and the
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apply
disadvantages
of change . İt can be certainly said changes
provide the development
of the governments
and the development
of the company but on the other hand
, they can eliminate our ethnic roots
or they can devestate
our Correct your spelling
devastate
environment
.
The change affect
human life in a crucial way . The two Change the verb form
affects
mainly
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main
advantages
of changes
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are
firstly
, changes
provide the development
of the governments
, and secondly
the development
of the company . Also
, changes
take place since the existence of the world , and thus
they affect companies or governments
. For instance
, technology has become the most important thing in the world while it was not used a hundred years ago , and thus
many companies began use
technologyAdd the particle
to use
to
their goals Change preposition
for
or
there were a few Correct word choice
apply
governments
hundred
years ago but afterwards, many Correct article usage
a hundred
governments
took place thanks to changes
.
Another point to consider is that the two mainly
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main
disadvantages
of changes
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are
firstly
, they can eliminate our ethnic roots
, and secondly
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,
devestate
our Correct your spelling
devastate
environment
. Thus
, changes
affect badly our ethnic roots
and our environment
. For instance
, there are no the
big builts two hundred years ago but nowadays , there are big builts everywhere , and Correct article usage
apply
therefore
the environment
exposure to bad effects due to car use or big builts or we forget our ethnic Replace the word
environmental
roots
almost due to changes
because the time pass
in a fast way .
İn conclusion , Change the verb form
passes
changes
have the disadvantages
such
as the eliminate
of our ethnic Replace the word
elimination
roots
or the devestate
of our Correct your spelling
devastate
devastated
environment
but on the other hand
, according to me , it can be certainly said the advantages
of changes
have a more effect
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effective
for
nature , and Change preposition
on
thus
the advantages
of changes
overweight the disadvantages
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