It is often considered that changes are more beneficial to people than traying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of changes overweight the disadvantages?

İt is considered by some people that
changes
are more beneficial to people than
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traying
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to avoid it and have everything remain the same. There are both
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advantages
and
the
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disadvantages
of change . İt can be certainly said
changes
provide the
development
of the
governments
and the
development
of the company but
on the other hand
, they can eliminate our ethnic
roots
or they can
devestate
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devastate
our
environment
. The change
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human life in a crucial way . The two
mainly
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advantages
of
changes
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firstly
,
changes
provide the
development
of the
governments
, and
secondly
the
development
of the company .
Also
,
changes
take place since the existence of the world , and
thus
they affect companies or
governments
.
For instance
, technology has become the most important thing in the world while it was not used a hundred years ago , and
thus
many companies began
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technology
to
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their goals
or
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there were a few
governments
hundred
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years ago but afterwards, many
governments
took place thanks to
changes
. Another point to consider is that the two
mainly
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disadvantages
of
changes
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firstly
, they can eliminate our ethnic
roots
, and
secondly
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,
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they can
devestate
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devastate
our
environment
.
Thus
,
changes
affect badly our ethnic
roots
and our
environment
.
For instance
, there are no
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big builts two hundred years ago but nowadays , there are big builts everywhere , and
therefore
the
environment
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exposure to bad effects due to car use or big builts or we forget our ethnic
roots
almost due to
changes
because the time
pass
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in a fast way . İn conclusion ,
changes
have the
disadvantages
such
as the
eliminate
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of our ethnic
roots
or the
devestate
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devastate
devastated
of our
environment
but
on the other hand
, according to me , it can be certainly said the
advantages
of
changes
have a more
effect
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for
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nature , and
thus
the
advantages
of
changes
overweight the
disadvantages
.
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