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The Only Reason For Learning A Foreign Language Is Work Or Travel . To what extent do you agree or disagree.?

#reason #language #work #travel
The goal of learning a foreign
language
 argued by some people is for working or travelling. Even though it was true reasons, it is not only the reasons. I do not agree with the statement because I believe there are other motives
such
 as continuing a study degree and friendship, so I will explain below. In
this
 modern life, many people have the intention to study abroad for
better
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 future. They have some preparation when though
this
 occasion including the
language
. It is a crucial device despite good academic achievement,
for example
, every university
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 the student the admission with some
languange
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language
 score. The score
was varies
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 between universities
for example
in
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English
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language
 university requires
the
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 minimum score
at
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 550 in TOEFL for postgraduate studies.
Therefore
, many
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 spend a lot of
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such
 as time,
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 the requirement. Young people in
this
 digital living have an amazing connection to the world through their social media. They love to learn
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languages because it will make a good relationship with their friends.
Although
 they can access the online dictionary easily, they need an active
language
that is
 used in some communications. It is
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 skill
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 them when
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 voice or video calls.
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, it will have
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positive
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positive
 impact
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exchange
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cultural
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diversity
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diversity
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next
 generation. To conclude, another reason for learning a foreign
language
 is both study and friendship. I suspect there are other numerous motivations for work or travel. Even though it was many reasons, everyone concurs
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 urgency of learning
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 foreign
language
 in
this
 period.
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