In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be a case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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widespread concern for decades. There are certain reasons to opt for each

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and different approaches regarding

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and demerits of each, which I will discuss now. People who are advocates for buying a house rather than renting it are of the opinion that it is a safer option to own a

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because you are not

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on the owner's opinion in order to stay in or move out

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, many are obliged to move too much and their life balance would be disrupted.

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, individuals who buy a house can do it up and refurbish it based on their own favours and interests.

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, the public

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that it is a great investment

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to buy

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apartments

and houses due to the fact that owning more than

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gives you the opportunity to rent the extra ones and make a living with the income.

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, some point out that renting has many good points. The

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is that people get to experience different circumstances ranging from new locations to various styles of design.

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they feel that the cost of renting a

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is way less than buying

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the reason is that the owner is responsible for

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and reconstruction expenses

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to the astronomical costs of the deposit and payments themselves. Ultimately, the money paid for purchasing a

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can be used for more important aspects of life

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as education or health insurance. In conclusion, considering

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merits and the economical value of purchasing an

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, its advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Having possessions not only brings financial security

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safeguards

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from hardship during the lifetime.