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Students in school should learn academic subjects and pass exams. Other skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork can be learnt well from family and friends. Do you agree and disagree

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 studying the main
subjects
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 and finishing all the examinations is crucial for the future of the
students
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. I partly disagree that less important
subjects
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 should not study by other people
instead
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 of teachers.
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 with, friends and family are not professional to teach
students
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 the right way and the correct theory to practice their cookery, dressmaking, and wood-making skills.
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,
students
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 should learn those
subjects
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 from the experts at school so that they can avoid accidents in wood-making.
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,
students
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 might find their talent when studying sub-
subjects
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 and that will be a memorable experience. These
subjects
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 may not use at the present but maybe in the future they will be able to use,
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, when your shirt is broken, you will know how to fix it because you had studied dressmaking before.
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,
although
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 sub-
subjects
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 are helpful and fun,
students
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 should spend limited time with them to have more time for academic
subjects
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. Learning math, history, philosophy and other main
subjects
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 can train
students
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’ minds and they will have a stable foundation to attain high scores on every exam.
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, they can have more achievement to decorate their CV for a better future. With all the knowledge
students
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 collect from their education path, they will have extensive knowledge and a wide vision of the world to develop themselves.
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, studying a lots helps us improve ourselves and closer to success. To summarize, not only should
students
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 learn sub-
subjects
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 in school if they are able to, but
also
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 should they spend more time on the main
subjects
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 to pass exams.
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, they should balance study between crucial and trivial
subjects
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.

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