For all children, the ability to play a musical instrument is just as important as the ability to read and write. How far do you agree with this suggestion? How important is it for a child to learn to play a musical instrument, in your view.

During childhood, every child ought to captivate a musical skill apart from their regular educational program.

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studies provide assistance in polishing their career prospective, playing a keyboard would enhance their mental ability at a tender age. I firmly believe that

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becoming proficient in both education and instruments is crucial and it would assist the pupil in their overall growth.

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with, extracurricular activities apart from reading and writing are essential to stimulate the brain actively. If a student

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indulged in playing an instrument at a young age, it would definitely help him to concentrate well

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his studies and

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keep him healthy. Recently it was seen that,

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students who play

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when they were young, tend to have strong lungs as compared to those who did not.

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develop the mindset of children saving them from boredom.

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, having multiple expertise would yield different choices in career

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. To elaborate

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, there would be exorbitant chances of getting

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in their area of interest whether it be in academics or

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industry.

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, the students who are proficient in playing any kind of instrument

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academics tend to get a high salaried

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.

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, learning a musical instrument would increase

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job opportunities in the future. To conclude, it can be inevitably seen that playing

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along with studies

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critical for the overall development of the children, but somehow it

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depends on the creativity and choice of the pupils.