You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter: Ask for time off and explain why Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence Write at least 150 words. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms. Snyder,

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Snyder, I am writing a letter to inform you that I will be on time off due to my trip scheduled
next
month. I am organizing a trip to my home town to attend a wedding ceremony.
This
has been planned recently and we have been cordially invited. It is my best childhood friend's son's marriage. We are like brothers and I need to attend it without fail.
Although
, I tried my level best to convince him
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he is not accepting it.
Therefore
, I will be on time off for 10 days starting from 1st September 2022. I have clubbed my time off with weekends in order to get some more days. I will be joining the duty on 11 September at 9:00 AM. I have already filled out the application form and just waiting for your forma approval.
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fully aware that our project deadline is very near.
However
, please note that I have completed all my activities and the project cycle is
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the
next
stage.
Therefore
, my absence will not impact any schedule.
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, I will hand over all my other jobs to my colleague
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David. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Anand Vaishnav
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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