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Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain Why you are writing to them Why you think the insurance should not be increased What you want them to do Write at least 150 words

#car #insurance #company #amount #month
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to complain about an email I received concerning a wrong decision
for
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augmentation
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 of
insurance
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the insurance
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 prices
of
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for
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 my car. My car has been insured for the past 3 years, while it has not had an accident to benefit from any of your services.
In addition
, according to
central
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bank
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 the rate of inflation
have
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has
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 increased
nearly
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by nearly
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 5% whilst your company
have
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has
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 raised the amount of payment up to 25% for each of its insurance categories which
is
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 not acceptable. In fact, putting pressure on customers to pay more may bring about an increase in the number of uninsured cars which in turn it affects the safety state of driving in society. I highly recommend you
to
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apply
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resend an apology letter to all of your customers, indicating that the previous letter was uncredited due to a managerial decision. In
this
 case, you will show us your honesty and in
return
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 you will receive our fidelity. I would appreciate
if
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 you could kindly mail
to
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it to
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 my supplied address. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Amir Safa
Submitted by amir.safa1984 on

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