Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

In the

last

two decades, we have observed that

students

are having

concentration

problems at school.

Unfortunately

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the main causes of

this

issue

is

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technology

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a technology

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and social media. I will discuss

further

on

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the solutions to

this

problem in the essay. The focus of

students

nowadays is primary on their mobile

phone

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, tablet,social media and games. All are related to

technology

.

Technology

does have its good causes but an

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use of

technology

is

consequently

creating health

issue

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many

students

such

as obesity, lack of

concentration

, speech delay and

moreover

kids

are

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more violent. Parents and teachers should set strict rules and regulations for

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of

technology

specially

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about the time and the contents that children are watching.

Conversely

, Art and music are

fundamental

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part

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of education which help kids to develop motor skills,

learning

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colours, developing

concentration

with small games,

thus

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the sense of listening.

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a

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conclusion, I believe that until

students

are exposed to

screen

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and social media, the

concentration

of kids at school will remain unchanged. Government and parents have their

duties

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to put severe conditions

with

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young people and should encourage other activities

such

as reading books, playing social games and

also

encourage them to practice sport.