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in some societies moer and more people are deciding to live alone .why do you think this is ?what are the advantages and disadvantages of living alone?

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in the
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contemporary
contemprary
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contemporary
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people
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 tend to live alone rather than in join family
wheather
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whether
 living alone is a
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negative
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positive
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positive
 which needs to be deliberated .In the
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following
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fallowing
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i
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 will discuss both sides as well as what is the reason
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behind
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this
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People
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 choose to live alone has
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upteen
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umpteen
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people
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do not
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do not
 like any kind of involvement of other
persons
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 in their personal
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 so they prefer to live independent to make any decisions which
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 not
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possible
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join
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family
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a family
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 folks
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became
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 a
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workaholic
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 they have no spare time to look after their
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 and children .
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 but not
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least it
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semes
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seems
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 costly
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living
livinf
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living
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big
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 family
in
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is
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 sort of
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like
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like
 medicine ,as
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needs
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 a lot of caring and medicine to stay life on the other
sides
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people
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are concern
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concern
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 that family works
as
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aboon
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a boon
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 for working
people
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 ,being
partents
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parents
 is a very tedious job without the help of family .They will have to
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manage
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mange
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manage
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 their jobs as well as
taker
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the taker
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 of their kids so they send their
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children
chikdren
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children
in
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dayy
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day
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 care school which is more expensive to admit . so if children live their
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grandparents
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grandparent's
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tey
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they
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 might be more enjoyable and
inthe
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in the
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ol
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of
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grandparent's
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grandparents
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 infant would bw learn more values and rituals .
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might
 be more healthy ,
for instance
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mass would be happy ,can share their feelings with each other and could
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 more
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energetic
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healthy
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the healthy
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 environment
instead
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 of
lonelness
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loneliness
 and depression .
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,they
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will be
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will be
 able
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to
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ti
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to
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 aid each other in doing all
housechorice
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house choice
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as
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clealing
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clearing
cleaning
house
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 ,cooking and so on. To sum
up
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single -person
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single-person
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 families
means
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mean
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lot
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 of work and
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expenditure
expenditures
 to admit their
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children
chilrdern
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children
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croth
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crotch
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nagtive
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negative
 impact on health , so
join
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joining
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family
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the family
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 is much better to enjoy their life .
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