Some people believe that children at school should learn art, others says it is a waste of time. What is your opinion?

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There is a discussion about whether
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is essential for students or not. Some people consider
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necessary for curriculums, others think it is needless. I totally agree with the former.
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of all, the belief exists that academy education does not need time for
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, some people want their children to exercise useful practical learning
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as math, chemicals and technology
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of emotional education because it gives them an advantage in higher education and employment.
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, others may think that
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knowledge is not beneficial in their future lives and
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not necessary to learn.
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, there is data that shows that learning subjects that foster flexible thinking,
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as
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, leads to higher achievement in other subjects.
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, I don't believe that
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art
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isn't necessary for
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institute program.
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, others consider that
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should be learned at
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, students can learn about the history of painting
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as Mona Liz and Guerunica during
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class
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, and they can
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gain knowledge about architecture,
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as the Gothic style.
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kind of experience enriches our daily lives.
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, painting and making things by yourself will help you develop the ability to imagine the finished product. Of course, there are many other subjects to be learned in
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, but without
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kind of time, how would a child from a family without the habit of being exposed to works of
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acquire liberal arts knowledge? For those reasons, I think we need to subject
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faculty
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. To summarize, one opinion is that practical studies
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as math and science are more useful, while the other view is that the
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of
craft
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is equally important for seminary children. I consider that the
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craft
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is essential at
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. Culture, like
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, is one of the items which can change how to see
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world.
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