Some people believe that children at school should learn art, others says it is a waste of time. What is your opinion?

There is a discussion about whether
art
is essential for students or not. Some people consider
craft
necessary for curriculums, others think it is needless. I totally agree with the former.
This
essay will discuss both of them and explain the reasons.
First
of all, the belief exists that academy education does not need time for
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.
For example
, some people want their children to exercise useful practical learning
such
as math, chemicals and technology
instead
of emotional education because it gives them an advantage in higher education and employment.
Also
, others may think that
craft
knowledge is not beneficial in their future lives and
therefore
not necessary to learn.
However
, there is data that shows that learning subjects that foster flexible thinking,
such
as
craft
, leads to higher achievement in other subjects.
Therefore
, I don't believe that
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art
isn't necessary for
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institute program.
Secondly
, others consider that
art
should be learned at
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.
For instance
, students can learn about the history of painting
such
as Mona Liz and Guerunica during
art
class
, and they can
also
gain knowledge about architecture,
such
as the Gothic style.
This
kind of experience enriches our daily lives.
Moreover
, painting and making things by yourself will help you develop the ability to imagine the finished product. Of course, there are many other subjects to be learned in
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, but without
this
kind of time, how would a child from a family without the habit of being exposed to works of
art
acquire liberal arts knowledge? For those reasons, I think we need to subject
art
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. To summarize, one opinion is that practical studies
such
as math and science are more useful, while the other view is that the
class
of
craft
is equally important for seminary children. I consider that the
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of
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craft
is essential at
institute
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. Culture, like
craft
, is one of the items which can change how to see
this
world.
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