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Museums should display art of their own country, or they should display art from all over the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (May 2021) Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Nowadays museums are one of the most popular attractions amongst
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international tourists. It is crucial to decide whether they must exhibit
art
 that reflects their own
country
 or from different countries throughout the world. I totally agree that the displays must reflect
its
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 own nation. In
this
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 I will explain why I feel so. One of the main reasons
of
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 presenting
art
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 their own
country
 is the knowledge behind it. The original inhabitants know the real stories
their
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 creative work better than any other in the world.
This
 could be because they have read and heard enough stories from their grandparents and other people revealing the real meaning behind making them.
Furthermore
, It is exciting for tourists to listen to those stories by a local guide who belongs to a generation doing it for years. Another major reason is cultural promotion. Every
country
 must use their museums to display their own
art
 in order to promote culture and heritage. Having said that, if all nations present their own creations it will attract more tourists.
Moreover
, it
also
 makes one’s
country
 famous for its
art
, thereby increasing the inflow of money through tourism.
For example
, millions of people around the globe visit India
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Jahangir’s
Art
 Museum. In conclusion,
although
 it is a very debatable topic, I would still completely agree
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 displaying the
art
 from one’s own
country
 rather than from several other nations.
This
 will not only maintain the accuracy of knowledge and
also
 attract more international visitors.
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