Woman can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many thing that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appropriated as much as men, although they have to sacrifice a lot to their family and career. What do you think?

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is considered by some people that

women

can do everything that

men

can and they even do it better. They

also

can do many

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that

men

cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appropriated as much as

men

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,

although

they have to sacrifice a lot

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their family and

career

. I completely agree with the

opinion

and in my

opinion

, the

job

right

should be provided to

women

by

governments

, or

seminars

can be given to

companies

by

governments

due to inequality

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men

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Firstly

, many

companies

generally prefer

men

for their

job

, and

thus

many

women

who have good

education

or good

career

can'

t

work in

companies

. İn my

opinion

, the

job

right

should be provided

such

as woman's takes place in

companies

to

women

by

governments

.

Companies

will acquire income in the best way if

women

who have good

education

or good

career

will have the

job

right

.

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, a man can'

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do

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everything

everthing

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but

on the other hand

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companies

generally give to only

men

the

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, and

thus

a man who has not good

education

or good

career

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t

be

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successful

successfull

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successful

in his

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. Many

women

will provide income over

men

who

have

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not good

education

or good

career

if

companies

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women

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Secondly

, unfortunately ,

although

women

have a good

education

or a good

career

they have to sacrifice a lot

to

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their

family

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and

career

. Because

companies

generally prefer

men

. İn my

opinion

, many

women

won'

t

need sacrifices a lot to their family and

career

if

governments

will set up

seminars

about

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right

or equality among

men

and

women

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, the president of my city provided

seminars

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right

for

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companies

owners

who live in my city , and

thus

companies

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owners

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the

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right

and inequality among

men

and

women

, afterwards

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companies

owners

began to prefer

men

and

women

in an equal way . İn conclusion , in my

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many

companies

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women

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in

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the world of

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, and

thus

it can certainly

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that the number of

men

is more than

women

in the world of

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jobs

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.

Therefore

inequality reveals

in

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between

men

and

women

in the world of

job

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jobs

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.

This

problem can be eliminated if

governments

will set up

seminars

about

the

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job

right

for company

owners

or

companies

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if companies

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will provide

to

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women

the

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job

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for income thanks to

women

who have good

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or

good

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career

.