Education is not luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

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Studying is one of the essentials in life. Providing citizens with good schooling must be a priority as it has a great impact not only on the individual but
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the society. I strongly argue that the presence of private schools and universities should stay optional for whom can offer the fees.
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,all education is the backbone to have a civilized community. When the government ensures providing the citizens with good quality of knowledge at schools and universities,undoubtedly it will be reflected in the community itself .
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the vast majority of people reckon that institutions should be free for everyone , regardless of their past achievements and intellectual abilities . Considering so is a fatal mistake from my perspective . Since schooling requires the resources,
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as a teacher's labour ,On top of that conducting a lesson is an expensive process ,particularly from greater professors and lecturers ,
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every student is not only an individual but
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an investment,that usually is made by the participant's parents or lessly by the pupil themselves.
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because the money invested is supposed to be returned or even multiplied .But
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may not work with everyone since not everybody is a good student , that's why
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conception may lead us to greater waste of resources .
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,there are other people whose point of view contradicts mine.And let's imagine that study turned out to be free for everyone . In that case ,most of the students will not value a lesson whereas now in the expensive universities all students study extremely hard to get good grades and successfully graduate ,
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conception of expensiveness makes it competitive ,and the better we compete the greater results we achieve,
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conception will be absolutely lost if science will be affordable for everybody
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it is difficult to apply to top institutions
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as Harvard or Oxford , and some students may not have enough money to pay tuition fees , but it is not a problem since the smart and skilled student will be provided with a scholarship to make learning cheaper or even free for them . To conclude , making learning academies free is equal to ruining all education systems since it is a waste of many resources ,that may not be returned . Possible decline or loss of competitiveness , and loss of appreciation will lead us to worsen discipline itself.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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