In today's world, everyone is running behind wealth blindly.Earning wealth is
of the art everyone wants to master ,
,hard
is not
of the ways to earn
and I completely disagree that laymen do hard
to earn
only.My subsequent crumb of writing will elucidate my viewpoints with relevant examples.
Commencing with, the ultimate goal of hard
is not
but to achieve different aspects of life. From
students learn and
hard so that
day they will join a prestigious college,
, things didn't end up here, students still competing with fellow mates to get
a Correct article usage
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good
marksCorrect the article-noun agreement
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which is a key to
enterWrong verb form
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corporate
with the handsome salaries.
, to clear
IITCorrect article usage
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entrance, I had to
had to spend 15-16 hours
intoChange preposition
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studies, cut off from myself from social media and friends to clear the entrance exams,but fails.
,
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hard
brings other abilities like dedication and commitment
towardsChange preposition
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.
, to get promotional early in the private organisation
had to compete with fellow colleagues, think out of
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and complete the project with 100% accuracy.Hard
along with
the Correct article usage
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smart
brings reputation and respect.Doing all
thingFix the agreement mistake
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is not a key to
earnWrong verb form
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but it's a guarantee to earn respect and fame,even labour do the hard
throughout the day but earn less than 3
dollarChange to a plural noun
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a day
in Change preposition
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which he or she can survive.
To conclude,in my opinion,
brings confidence,concentration and respect, even
uneducatedCorrect article usage
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person can
earn wealth,but the ple,
to earn all
thingFix the agreement mistake
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is Unnecessary verb
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a
is a Remove the redundancy
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different level.