In today's world, everyone is running behind wealth blindly.Earning wealth is
one
of the art everyone wants to master ,
however
,hard
work
is not
one
of the ways to earn
money
and I completely disagree that laymen do hard
work
to earn
money
only.My subsequent crumb of writing will elucidate my viewpoints with relevant examples.
Commencing with, the ultimate goal of hard
work
is not
money
but to achieve different aspects of life. From
students learn and
work
hard so that
one
day they will join a prestigious college,
moreover
, things didn't end up here, students still competing with fellow mates to get
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good
marksCorrect the article-noun agreement
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which is a key to
enterWrong verb form
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corporate
work
with the handsome salaries.
For example
, to clear
IITCorrect article usage
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entrance, I had to
work
had to spend 15-16 hours
intoChange preposition
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studies, cut off from myself from social media and friends to clear the entrance exams,but fails.
Furthermore
,
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hard
work
also
brings other abilities like dedication and commitment
towardsChange preposition
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work
.
For example
, to get promotional early in the private organisation
one
had to compete with fellow colleagues, think out of
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and complete the project with 100% accuracy.Hard
work
along with
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smart
work
brings reputation and respect.Doing all
such
thingFix the agreement mistake
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is not a key to
earnWrong verb form
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money
but it's a guarantee to earn respect and fame,even labour do the hard
work
throughout the day but earn less than 3
dollarChange to a plural noun
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a day
in Change preposition
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which he or she can survive.
To conclude,in my opinion,
brings confidence,concentration and respect, even
uneducatedCorrect article usage
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person can
also
earn wealth,but the ple,
to earn all
such
thingFix the agreement mistake
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is Unnecessary verb
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a
is a Remove the redundancy
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different level.