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Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education.

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It is a saying that memorising
facts
 is a meaningful way to succeed in education. I partly agree with it, and
this
 essay will explain why. Many
students
 are troubled by their studies, and memorising
facts
 plays a vital role in learning. If
students
 can not remember the fundamental
knowledge
,
further
 study will be arduous.
Rote
memorisation
 is a suitable method to grasp wisdom quickly; repeat it for a long time, and
students
 will keep understanding in mind.
Also
, it is a way without ability limits. A number of
students
 are not gifted; it is difficult for them to achieve a good score. Even
rote
memorisation
 can not allow them to be at the top of the list but enable them to pass tests.
On the other hand
, memorising
facts
 causes some problems for
students
. When
students
 are used to
rote
memorisation
, it will reduce their creativity. They would like to recite textbook
knowledge
instead
 of using their brain to think; namely, they will use their brain less, and their thinking skill will be rusty.
Furthermore
, it will be tough for them to learn depth content.
Rote
memorisation
 is an excellent way to learn basic
knowledge
, but it only provides basic
knowledge
. Deep learning needs to use
students
‘ minds to think, and
rote
 learning will slow down the learning progress.
As a result
, in deep learning,
students
 are easily dragged down by
rote
 learning. To sum up, it is difficult to tell whether memorising
facts
are
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is
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 good or bad. What we may have to consider is how to use memorising
facts
 correctly.
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