Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festival; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?.
These days,
festivals
are held and celebrated without actually knowing the meaning or intentions behind
. They are set up mainly because they are something Correct pronoun usage
thembehind
people
occasionally do. I partially agree with the statement that People
focus on enjoying themselves, but hardly remembered the values and meaning of those traditions with my reasons explained in this
essay.
To begin
with, traditional or religious festivals
are passing
on to generations through actions and teachings. Wrong verb form
passed
People
tend to follow their predecessors, thus
celebrate and hold Correct word choice
and thus
festivals
. They not only know when to celebrate but also
why they are important to their backgrounds. For instance
, Songran
day, a traditional festival, that allows individuals to enjoy splashing water, Correct your spelling
Songkran
also
a special occasion for the descendants to pay respect to both their living and deceased ancestors. Almost every Add a missing verb
is also
thai
Change the capitalization
Thai
people
know the values and reasons behind this
festive occasion because we were taught since we were young. Moreover
, when it comes to Buddhist clebrations
, many Correct your spelling
celebrations
buddhists
realize the importance. Visakha Change the capitalization
Buddhists
bucha
day represents the birth date, enlightenment day and death date of the Buddha.
Change the capitalization
Bucha
However
, there are festivals
celebrated that meanings
are forgotten. Fix the agreement mistake
meaning
This
is because the focus has been on the excitement and fun rather than the
history and origin of them. Phi Ta Khon, a local Thai festival Change the word
their
that is
celebrated annually hardly been recognized by
its true meaning for allowing auspicious circumstances to occur.
In summary, being forgotten for its own value or not hugely depend on the public. If they pay attention to roots, the history and meaning will remain and keep on living.Change preposition
for
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