A friend has written a letter to you informing you about his or her plan to visit your country/city. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: what he or she can do in your country/city advise him about the place he could stay at suggest to him/her what to pack and bring while coming to travel to your country/city

Dear Ravi, It's mixed emotions to write

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letter and glad to know about your upcoming tour to my place which is going to have a phenomenal experience during stay in my country.

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, you explore mesmerising theme parks throughout Vancouver city.

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, we have spectacular waterfalls and breathtaking sceneries in the middle of the province to have a splendid experience. As you know, the Vancouver downtown is the best place to stay despite the skyrocketing rentals and additional charges.

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, we do have some shared accommodations if you are anxious about rental charges which cost you an eye and a leg. Having said that, I would like to suggest your travel packages which are going to save your's extra expenses.

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, please do not forget to bring some ready-made food items and

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not to carry any drinks in your luggage which may cause an issue at customs check.

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but not least, an umbrella is mandatory as we do not know when the rain comes to the city. I cannot wait anymore to meet you and I look forward to meeting you at the YVR airport. I wish you a very happy and safe journey. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

lakshma999

Sep 1, 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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204 words

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