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Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible argument on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

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Offspring's leisure
time
 is become a debatable topic, nowadays. Few civilians believe that kids should spend their free
time
 with their family, whereas the rest of the folks think that it is pessimistic or not required to tell them to spend their whole free
time
 with family. in
this
 essay, I will discuss both sides and state that in my opinion, offspring should allocate some
time
 for the family and the rest of the
time
 for other activities
such
 as sports, relaxation, exercise and etcetera. On the one side, according to a few people, if kids spend all of their
time
 with family, they learn about family values and they know each other closely. As result,
this
 bond will assist them to stand up during any harsh situation.
For example
, according to New York University survey
last
 year, 70% of the
children
 are more strong during struggle times as they know that their family is with them. On the other side, the rest of the people think that it is not necessary to abide the
children
 with
such
 obligation as it makes a negative impression on their fragile minds. To explain, if they put pressure on the child to invest their spare
time
 with family, it would restrict them to be in a comfort zone.
For instance
, as per
last
 week's newspaper records,
children
 are ruining their life by becoming self-centred.
that is
 why they think it is unnecessary or negative. As per my perspective, parents should teach
children
 how to spend
time
 with family as well outside with other kids, so that
this
 way they know the values of the family and
also
 become bold and pessimistic with all other activities. In conclusion, both sides have plus and minus points to teach
children
. If parents guide them correctly with gentle support and care,
then
children
 become excellent in both matters.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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