You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

#seminar #country #person #charge #information #dates #program #accommodation #cost #addresses

Dear Sir, My name is Anand Vaishnav. I am writing a letter in order to take part in a work-related

seminar

which has been scheduled in Australia. As I am working in the manufacturing industry,

this

seminar

would be grateful for me to know the recent development and technology in the machinery which are being used in our industry.

Therefore

, I would be grateful if you could provide me with some details related to the

seminar

Firstly

, please advise me of the exact dates and timing of it.

Secondly

, the agenda, program summary and vendors list who are going to attend it. Since my company will be bearing the cost, kindly give the breakdown of the expenses for each activity of the event.

Moreover

, I need to know about the accommodation as well, as it's part of the total cost or the individual has to manage it.

Such

information is required in advance to book the hotel accommodation nearby

seminar

Correct article usage

the seminar

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venue. I appreciate your support and cooperation to share

this

information at the earliest. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Anand Vaishnav

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