You have left college but you didn’t say goodbye to your friend who lived in the room with you because he had a course that time. Write a letter to him. In your letter  Apologize and tell him how you spent the day when you left  Tell him how you got home  Invite him to visit you.

Dear
Camilie
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Camille
, I feel
your
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were very
frustracted
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frustrated
about my left without a goodbye to you. So, I writing
this
letter to
sorry
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about
this
.
Firstly
, I need to
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apologize
appologize
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apologise
to you for my left and I have
not
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say
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goodbye to you. I hope
this
letter will give you a
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completely
competely
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complete
reason that you will forgive me. I know that I gave you
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wrong information about my left time,
its
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because I
competely
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forget the time that I booked before.
Therefore
, I must
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left
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at
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the morning yesterday to reached my train to
came
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back home. Unfortunately, I was unable to contact you by phone, because my phone had no battery.
Moreover
, I arrived
to
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my hometown at 6pm and I need to went to the hospital as soon as possible to
visited
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my father who was
sicked
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.
Consequently
, I writing
this
letter to you
in
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the
next
day.
In addition
, I
grateful
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about my father is stable today. I am not able to come back to study in a while, but we can meet
at
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my hometown, you can get a train that
around
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2 hours
then
you will arrive.
Thus
, I will take you to the
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famous
famuos
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family
attraction and have a good meal with you. I
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apologize
appologize
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apologise
again for I
did't
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didn't
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say
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goodbye and I left. I look
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forward
foward
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forward
to your
respond
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and hope to see you soon. Love, Kelly
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