You have left college but you didn’t say goodbye to your friend who lived in the room with you because he had a course that time. Write a letter to him. In your letter  Apologize and tell him how you spent the day when you left  Tell him how you got home  Invite him to visit you.

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Dear

Camilie

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Camille

, I feel

your

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were very

frustracted

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frustrated

about my left without a goodbye to you. So, I writing

this

letter to

sorry

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about

this

Firstly

, I need to

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apologize

appologize

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apologise

to you for my left and I have

not

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say

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goodbye to you. I hope

this

letter will give you a

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completely

competely

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complete

reason that you will forgive me. I know that I gave you

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wrong information about my left time,

its

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because I

competely

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completely

forget the time that I booked before.

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, I must

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left

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the morning yesterday to reached my train to

came

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back home. Unfortunately, I was unable to contact you by phone, because my phone had no battery.

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, I arrived

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my hometown at 6pm and I need to went to the hospital as soon as possible to

visited

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my father who was

sicked

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Consequently

, I writing

this

letter to you

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apply

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the

day.

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, I

grateful

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about my father is stable today. I am not able to come back to study in a while, but we can meet

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my hometown, you can get a train that

around

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2 hours

then

you will arrive.

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, I will take you to the

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famous

famuos

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family

attraction and have a good meal with you. I

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apologize

appologize

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apologise

again for I

did't

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didn't

don't

say

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goodbye and I left. I look

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forward

foward

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forward

to your

respond

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and hope to see you soon. Love, Kelly

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8 paragraphs

234 words

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