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There has been more and more mass shooting, especially in schools. Some people think that the best way to solve this problem is to provide the ability of possessing gun to the teacher, while others argue that this will be the start of more violence. To what extent do you agree?

#mass #schools #people #ability #gun #teacher #start #violence
There
has
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 been huge numbers of mass shootings, in schools
in particular
. One can safely assume that the best way to solve the problem is
teacher
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a teacher
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 can possess the
gun
, while others argue that
this
 will be the beginning of more violence. I agree with
former
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 view. Admittedly,
gun
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possessibility
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possibility
 of
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the teacher
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teacher
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 is hardly the most appropriate solution to solve
this
 problem. As the role of a
teacher
 is teaching and taking their students to heights.
Moreover
, certain teachers lacking
of
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responsibility may pose certain problems.
Thus
, possessing
gun
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 of a
teacher
 will serve as a bad role model to children.
In addition
 to
this
, there will be
incident
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to
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 those around the
gun
 owner. A good illustration of
this
 is
teacher
 shoots somebody
instead
 of protecting them.
Furthermore
, lacking
of
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attention from executives
of
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learning
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 environment may put them in more trouble about security since it is opined
by
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them
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 no one will start
the
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violence in school.
As a result
, every school should have
security
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a security
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 guard that has
taser
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gun
 and have been trained about using
gun
 and safety to provide
trust
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 of parents and individuals. To conclude, providing
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a gun
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gun
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guns
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 to
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the teacher
a teacher
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teacher
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teachers
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 isn’t solving the mass shooting in
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the school
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school
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schools
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.
In addition
, the presence of
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a gun
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gun
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guns
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 in
learning
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the learning
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environment
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 may lead to cases that shouldn’t happen.
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