You have recently landed in a foreign country on a work visa and need information about the place in and around the city. Write a letter to the relocation assistance provider seeking help and in your letter, Write why you are writing the letter What kind of information you want How and by when you can get the requested information

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to ask you
some
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information about my workplace that I recently move in. I came to London
yeaterday
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yesterday
and I need to inboard to my workplace
next
Monday.
Moreover
, London is a stranger city that I have not
visit
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before. The reason why I writing
this
letter is
because
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I have not clearly
understand
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the
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transportation
tranportation
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transportation
system and how to get to my workplace from my home. I think I need more information about the location of my office and which train station
close
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to.
Moreover
, My living place is not closer to the train station that could you please provide the bus station map to me?
In addition
, are there
have
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any transportation pass for the citizen, because the transportation fee is more expensive
.
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I have registered a phone no yesterday, you could contact me
9
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am to 6pm
in
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tomorrow. My phone no is 77777771. You can leave a voice message or text me if you feel convenient to contact me. I
am look
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forward
for
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your response and pleasant for your help.
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Your
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faithfully, Cheung
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