You have recently landed in a foreign country on a work visa and need information about the place in and around the city. Write a letter to the relocation assistance provider seeking help and in your letter, Write why you are writing the letter What kind of information you want How and by when you can get the requested information
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to ask you some
information about my workplace that I recently move in.
I came to London Change preposition
for some
yeaterday
and I need to inboard to my workplace Correct your spelling
yesterday
next
Monday. Moreover
, London is a stranger city that I have not visit
before. The reason why I writing Change the form of the verb
visited
this
letter is because
I have not clearly Replace the word
that
understand
the Change the verb form
understood
Correct your spelling
transportation
tranportation
system and how to get to my workplace from my home.
I think I need more information about the location of my office and which train station Correct your spelling
transportation
close
to. Add a missing verb
is close
Moreover
, My living place is not closer to the train station that could you please provide the bus station map to me? In addition
, are there have
any transportation pass for the citizen, because the transportation fee is more expensiveUnnecessary verb
apply
.
I have registered a phone no yesterday, you could contact meChange the punctuation
?
9
am to 6pm Change preposition
from 9
in
tomorrow. My phone no is 77777771. You can leave a voice message or text me if you feel convenient to contact me.
I Change preposition
apply
am look
forward Change the verb form
am looking
for
your response and pleasant for your help.
Change preposition
to
Correct the word
Yours
Your
faithfully,
CheungCorrect your spelling
Yours
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite