Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believe that some information is too important or to valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Sharing
information
in any sector is play a great role and helps the community. Some individuals believe that it is good to share
more and more information
in scientific research
, business sectors and academic research
, while others think that some information
is too crucial and valuable to share
freely. In this
essay, I will look at both views and I will explain my reason
for it in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, having unlimited access to information
in terms of current events and history gives people enormous empowerment. For example
, during the corona pandemic, the whole world suffers from this
virus and for that reason
, it was strictly announced that the community should make distance themselves from each other and keep themselves healthy which helps them to prevent this
virus. Hence
, this
data
was much valuable for the community as well as important for them and for that reason
it share
freely in the world.
On the other hand
, there is some instruction which is not freely spread to the public due to the following reasons. Firstly
, some information
has its own privacy and restriction to share
with the public, this
is because they can make it the wrong way and sometimes misuse this
data
. For example
, Share
market instruction is never shared with brokers, this
is because it has a chance to misuse the share
of the particular share
market. To illustrate this
, in 1992 Indian broker "Harshad Mehta" illegally increase his share
reason
that he got data
from inside the share
market. Also
, scientists are working harder in their experiments and sometimes they used some toxic gases and poisons if we share
the research
freely in the public it might be a chance to misuse this
research
.
To conclude, after considering all, in my opinion, I think that sharing some data
in the public is valuable and important but also
some info has its own privacy and restricted to share
openly.Submitted by azone2646 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite