Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

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of teaching
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by parents or any relative is the
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they can improve child skills .
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a competition and cooperative spirit . In conclusion , since there are
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growth and
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